dive

This post is inspired by Sam

(And by a certain somebody who loves making fun of all my posts…).

Are you ready?
Did i hear you ask me to take your hand?
Did you hold me steady?
And is this where we stand? At the edge….

Violins and roses…a castle in the air
Shall we take the leap?
I can see the lighthouse afar
how deep is deep?

All i wanted
was to hear you say you love me
And make all illusions reality
Instead you pushed me
Into the dark sea.

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~ by tia on October 1, 2007.

7 Responses to “dive”

  1. Violins and roses…a castle in the air
    Shall we take the leap?
    I can see the lighthouse afar
    how deep is deep?
    hahaha..is it me or my perverted mind…phew…need to hit the temples and ashrams soon..god save me..
    u wrote this?

  2. *ancientmariner
    yes i wrote it…and poetry is enjoyed through it interpretation and the meaning it holds to the reader..how u interpret it…

  3. nicely written…forget my earlier commment..was sleep-writing.:(

  4. Little miss sunshine strikes again!!!!!!!!

    Sheesh, whats with you and like sad stories? Talking trees, trapped girls, evil and darkness, sheesh, people probably think your Mrs. Stephen King or something.

    You can write well, so why not try your hand at comedy or something a bit more light? I’m not saying write children’s books, just that your stories seem so dark sometimes. Now if it was one or two, its fine, but thats all you seem to write.

    Hmmmm wait wait, let me think of something funny to say about this one, wait folks, wait.

    ….

    ….





    Noooo, sorry to leave you guys like a disfunctional viagra, but I can’t come up with anything.

  5. *blah
    finally!u got it…yes u aren funny 😛

  6. That last line was funny, ur just too old to get it amaaaachiiiiiii!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😀

  7. *blah
    ooof! i got it…but u admitted…ooof i hav no patience for this..

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